SUPA: Pinned Down (578 hits)
Category: NoneRating: 1.34 on 29 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by ghola (View user info) at 2007-04-06 14:51:29 EDT
Woman is mow now own moan
Scare is care sear scar ace races
Constrict is strict ton scorn rots
Animal is anal aim
Grasping is gasp rasp gasping
Meat is eat ate mate team tame
Thrusting is hung grit hit sting
Banger is bang bare grab rage
Whimper is wimp whim ripe whip
Tangle is get tan leg lean
Scream is ream cream ram cram came
Sobbing is sob big gob sin
Hassle is ass lass less heals
Escape is pace see seep peace
Dealing is laid gain dig ail
User Reviews
Submitted by carbon (user info) at 2007-07-27 22:04:04 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by ikari_shinji (user info) at 2007-07-26 15:35:11 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
-2DIE FUCKING BITCH
Submitted by Coleslaw_Murphy (user info) at 2007-04-12 00:09:19 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
This is probably too late to boost the rating.
But I wanted to.
Submitted by Coleslaw_Murphy (user info) at 2007-04-11 19:21:22 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Interesting. This continues to grow on me.
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2007-04-11 18:08:05 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I can't stomach directionless and groundless poetry.
But you're playing with language here, perhaps in the purest way possible. You're in the sandbox with it making castles and kicking it into someone else's eye. I've read a lot of words so far and too few of them have been used to their potential.
Submitted by Anansie (user info) at 2007-04-11 16:54:42 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
1.5
Submitted by Anansie (user info) at 2007-04-11 16:52:33 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Good job with some of the slant rhyme, girlie.
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2007-04-11 12:02:12 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Submitted by goferforhire (user info) at 2007-04-10 13:09:35 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Helluva gamble
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Modern. Ninja. Different.
Submitted by JoeyG (user info) at 2007-04-11 02:53:34 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
different..... but it works for me
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2007-04-10 18:48:05 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I changed my mind.
Submitted by The_Drake (user info) at 2007-04-10 18:29:56 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Good luck to all contestants.
Submitted by goferforhire (user info) at 2007-04-10 13:09:35 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Helluva gamble
Submitted by lungfish (user info) at 2007-04-07 00:05:52 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by ghola (user info) at 2007-04-06 23:52:18 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
you just payed off your student loans???
if you're not kidding, i'm fucked.
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Yup...you're fucked. Then again, I'm ONLY 39.
I shouldn't have rated this, it being a contest and all...and me not knowing poetry. Eh...but it's Ghola, and she's fucked.
Submitted by DrogoRoch (user info) at 2007-04-06 22:46:14 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Submitted by The_Drake (user info) at 2007-04-06 15:14:58 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
This was a great poem deserving of a plus 2.
Now you know what would be fantastic? A plus 2 from you.
http://www.ubersite.com/m/100431
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I really din't get this; but you are more intelligent than me (which isn't hard seeing as I had a fucking special need kid correct my speeling the other day) so I am giving a 1, also you have tities and I don't, shallow I know.
The Drakes comment amused me. i'm off to give that post a +2
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2007-04-06 18:02:10 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
I'm not "feeling" this one, baby.
Submitted by Shamone (user info) at 2007-04-06 17:00:09 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
this fucking sucked, even for this crappy genre
Submitted by rob_berg (user info) at 2007-04-06 16:40:38 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I thought this was brilliant.
Submitted by The_taste_of_Monkeys (user info) at 2007-04-06 15:33:06 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
OK I guess.
Also: WE'RE PINNED DOWN! ZIPS IN THE WIRE! etc etc etc
Submitted by JonnyX (user info) at 2007-04-06 15:19:47 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
A MAN A PLAN A CANAL PANAMA
Submitted by skrapmetal (user info) at 2007-04-06 15:18:18 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Pinned Down is owned
Pinned Down is nope
Pinned Down is new
Pinned Down is dine
Pinned Down is inn
Pinned Down is now
Pinned Down is won
Submitted by ThatsGodToYouBitches (user info) at 2007-04-06 15:18:12 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
+2 for creativety
Submitted by The_Drake (user info) at 2007-04-06 15:14:58 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
This was a great poem deserving of a plus 2.
Now you know what would be fantastic? A plus 2 from you.
http://www.ubersite.com/m/100431
Submitted by Method (user info) at 2007-04-06 15:09:31 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
NEEEEENJA POWERRRRRRRRRRRR
Submitted by gravitas (user info) at 2007-04-06 15:01:08 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
great way to use a title.
too bad the alter pot's been stirred.
Submitted by Zebra (user info) at 2007-04-06 15:00:11 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Boring.
The potential was there if you had had more fun with it and woven in a (more) discernible theme.
I mean, if you're going to play, PLAY.
Worth reading.
Submitted by ghola (user info) at 2007-04-06 14:59:29 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
boggle pwns everything.
Submitted by ghola (user info) at 2007-04-06 14:59:10 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
i've been playing a lot of boggle lately.
Submitted by DudeThatsBOSH (user info) at 2007-04-06 14:58:50 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by hugafriend (user info) at 2007-04-06 14:53:32 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
this is fucking stupid
i dont really dig poetry (IE I can't tell good from bad).. nothing personal. I would have stayed away from the post altogether but i'm sure its not as bad as the clown below seems to think.
Submitted by hugafriend (user info) at 2007-04-06 14:53:32 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
this is fucking stupid