Whispers - Gruberfest 08 (503 hits)
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Submitted by Brdn_Nkd (View user info) at 2008-10-14 10:38:12 EDT
Her life, like others before her, ended with the sounds of whispers. I found her, saved her, and brought her back with me to release her from the nightmare of her life. She was young but had seen more in her short life than so many of the mindless middle class cows that she was already old. She worked the streets, pleasing men for money, stealing, and occasionally combining the two.
I found her the same way I always find them. Out driving my car I saw her standing on the corner so I pulled up next to her and asked her to come to me.
"I get $35 for a blow, $75 for vaginal, $125 for anal."
Her voice was sultry, silky, and beautiful. When she leaned into her car her blouse advertised for her, dropping open to reveal two perfect breasts with round pink nipples.
"Get in, I'll take it all" I whispered.
She slid into the car, momentarily flashing me a view of her crotch unencumbered by underwear.
"Blow me while I find us a hotel."
I drove off as she unbuttoned my pants and began to do her job, licking slowly first, then just her lips on the head and finally taking it all in. I drove past three hotels before she finally pulled the release I was waiting for into her mouth.
I pulled into a hotel and got a room and then led her to it. When we got to the room she set her purse down and began to undress.
"Not like that." And I pulled the blade from my pocket.
She went wide eyed and began to panic. I pulled a wad of hundred dollar bills from the same pocket the blade had come from and threw them on the bed. She looked from the blade to the bills and back again before finally meeting my eyes.
I ran the blade along the flat of her stomach and listened to it whisper it's deadly tune through the fabric of her shirt. The shirt fell away to reveal, once again, the beautiful full breasts I'd glimpsed earlier. I slowly ran the flat of the blade down one breast, over her nipple and down her flat stomach sliding it between her skin and her skirt before turning it to cut the waistband of the skirt. With another whisper the skirt slid down her legs and left her standing naked before me.
I held the blade still and she looked at it questioningly, then glanced at the bills and finally back to me again.
"Lay down, close your eyes."
She lay on the bed and I took in the sight enjoying the shape of her neck, her breasts, her waist and the landing strip pointing to her pussy. I undressed reveling in the picture before me the whole time and then I knelt between her legs and with a single forceful thrust entered her.
I stayed still for a moment and again traced her beautiful body with the flat of my knife, enjoying the shiver that ran through her as the cold metal slid across her flesh. I turned the knife then so the sharp blade could drag across her skin, removing some of the fuzz of hair. She shivered again but still lay still waiting, hoping that she could take the money and take a week off.
I fucked her then, continually moving the blade along her flesh and watching her uncertainty as it caressed her skin. I came hard and the blade dug in and bit for just a moment leaving a small cut on her left breast. Her eyes widened but she didn't make a sound. I could see the terror in her building but still the money outweighed the danger. Naïve, stupid girl.
I knew he was going to be a strange one when he whispered "Get in, I'll take it all." But he looked to have money and it's not as though most of the tricks I turn are with normal guys.
I blew him while he drove and when he came I discretely spit out what he gave me on the floor of his car. He got a room and took me up and that's when things turned. I started to undress but he pulled a long, bright, blade from his pocket. "not like that" he whispered again and then he pulled a wad of bills from the same pocket and threw it on the bed. I looked at the bills, silently counting, and then looked back to him. The blade was scary as hell but I wanted the cash, needed the cash.
He ran the cold blade along my stomach, cut my shirt off and stood looking at my chest. He brought the blade up and ran the flat of it down a breast, across my nipple and then down my stomach. My nipple went rock hard when the blade crossed it and I felt the sensation follow the blade as it worked into my skirt and cut it away. Standing naked before him I tried to see danger in his eyes but all I could see was desire and since that's what I'm used to I recounted the bills and waited.
"Lay down." Doing as I was told I lay on the bed and closed my eyes. The feel of the blade still traveled on my flesh but the look of it preyed on my mind. Before I could think more on it he was pushing into me and once he was as deep as he could get he stopped again this time ran the sharp part of the blade up and down my body. I actually came. None of my tricks has ever given me an orgasm but he did and he did it before we even fucked. I think he felt it because he began fucking me, still moving the blade along my body. I was still riding the first orgasm when he came and cut my breast. I felt the bite of it, the hardness of his cock inside me, the continued movement of the blade and I came again.
I stay silent, overwhelmed by the physical sensation and a building fear inside of me. He grinned then, and I realized when he whispered again that he'd only spoken in whispers.
"I made you cum didn't I?"
I saw the danger flash in his eyes then and in answer told him we were done.
"I'm sorry sweetheart, we're just getting started."
I knew then she was the one. I reached under the bed, a bed I'd seen once today already, and grabbed the gag I'd hidden there. She fought back but was too small and weak to hinder me. I placed the gag and then tied her to the bed, arms stretched out, legs spread eagled. I stood and enjoyed the view again, A truly magnificient body, the small cut on her breast still slowly seeping blood, some of it smeared on her chest from our brief struggle.
I saw the danger flash in his eyes then and in answer told him we were done.
I tried to get up but he held me down, easily restraining me with one hand despite my desperate struggle. I tried to scream but he'd already produced a gag and had it shoved in my mouth even as I drew the breath. I continued trying to thrash, to escape, to hurt him but he tied me to the bed with ease and then stood back staring at me. Leering now, I felt more naked and afraid than I ever had before and I could feel my skin crawling as he whispered again.
"I'll save you beautiful, save you from the horrid life you live, you're too beautiful to lead such an existence."
I thrashed again, hoping to break my bonds, hoping for that surge of super strength you hear about in people in grave danger. The bonds held and I could begin to smell the fear in my sweat and could feel its sapping energy coursing through me.
He turned away and when he turned back he held a scalpel in his hand. His cock was still rock hard but that seemed to be the last thing on his mind as he brought the blade to my skin and again traced the shape of my body with it. This time I could feel the blade biting from time to time as he gave it just enough pressure to do so.
Still he continued running the blade over my body, cutting my breasts, my stomach, my thighs, my cheeks. Even amid the terror the blade moving on my skin felt good, the cuts stung but the small little bite of the blade sent shivers through me each time it cut. I'm ashamed to admit that my body betrayed me and I came again. I was so ashamed, so scared, so tired and had no choice in anything. In a fit of rebellion I bucked as hard as I could when I felt the blade running across my stomach. The pain was intense as the blade pierced my stomach but the reward of his scream of anger brought satisfaction. He slapped me and my head rocked from the blow.
Fucking bitch! She can't want to die, she can't, she can't! I was playing, giving her pleasure, and she jumped in her bonds causing the blade to puncture, to dip into her. She passed out when I hit her, giving me the chance to recover my composure but I could still feel the anger. She spoiled it, she ruined it. She was supposed to stay still, scared stiff, while I slowly led her to the end and instead she caused herself pain and accelerated her death.
It made me angry but I finished the job letting her die in whispers, my whispers, the whispers of the blade separating her flesh, the whispers of her last breathes leaving her empty.
User Reviews
Submitted by St_Jimmy (user info) at 2008-10-20 11:23:15 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by JoeyG (user info) at 2008-10-18 02:41:08 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
You win!
Submitted by therealgeddylee (user info) at 2008-10-16 18:08:02 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
This would be a lovely addition to www.asstr.org.
Nonetheless, +2 for murdering whores in the classiest of manner.
Submitted by Crystle (user info) at 2008-10-16 03:17:55 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
blind alterific rating
Submitted by monkeyswithguns (user info) at 2008-10-15 14:53:38 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by CaptainThorns (user info) at 2008-10-15 01:49:26 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
It's settled, I am NOT getting in your car tomorrow night after we're done at the bar. ^_^
Submitted by JoeyG (user info) at 2008-10-14 14:13:23 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
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Submitted by Jack_McCallum (user info) at 2008-10-14 13:42:09 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I was gonna 1.9342343326 this, read it again, and now think it is a +2.
Submitted by EmissionImpossible (user info) at 2008-10-14 12:53:16 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
sssssasa my keyboaaaaaard is fucccccked
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2008-10-14 12:29:39 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
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Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2008-10-14 11:42:37 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
FJ, anything remotely sexual gives you a semi.
Anything.
Submitted by F.J.Bell (user info) at 2008-10-14 11:37:58 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2008-10-14 16:32:07 BST (#)
Ranking: 2
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Submitted by F.J.Bell (user info) at 2008-10-14 16:28:14 BST (#)
Ranking: 2
I found the whole orgasm-at-knifepoint a bit unlikely, but enjoyed this nonetheless.
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Yeah, all the other posts have been *so* realistic.
You know, FJ, there are people who mastubate at the thought of being eaten? Like, cooked and eaten?
Maybe he picked someone who was as touched as him and that was kinda the catch.
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Really? How handy. Personally, I masturbate at the thought of eating people. Cooking them and eating them. Perhaps there is some sort of support group...
Yeah this was a good post, it even gave me a semi.
Submitted by Littlebint (user info) at 2008-10-14 11:35:13 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2008-10-14 11:32:07 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
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Submitted by F.J.Bell (user info) at 2008-10-14 16:28:14 BST (#)
Ranking: 2
I found the whole orgasm-at-knifepoint a bit unlikely, but enjoyed this nonetheless.
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Yeah, all the other posts have been *so* realistic.
You know, FJ, there are people who mastubate at the thought of being eaten? Like, cooked and eaten?
Maybe he picked someone who was as touched as him and that was kinda the catch.
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Yeah FJ YEAH! Pfffffttt
I liked this Brdn
Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2008-10-14 11:32:07 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
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Submitted by F.J.Bell (user info) at 2008-10-14 16:28:14 BST (#)
Ranking: 2
I found the whole orgasm-at-knifepoint a bit unlikely, but enjoyed this nonetheless.
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Yeah, all the other posts have been *so* realistic.
You know, FJ, there are people who mastubate at the thought of being eaten? Like, cooked and eaten?
Maybe he picked someone who was as touched as him and that was kinda the catch.
Submitted by Brdn_Nkd (user info) at 2008-10-14 11:31:01 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
i thought about that but then i thought... the body reacts strangely under duress sometimes. some people find fear and stress heightens the sexual experience and in this circumstance it'd be something different and maybe slightly exciting, albeit scary, for a sex pro.
either way, thanks again for suspension of disbelief you know?
Submitted by Brdn_Nkd (user info) at 2008-10-14 11:29:08 EDT (#)
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orphelia... there's a shocking amount of deviance in many of my posts. I have some guy blowing an emu in one story, violence in too many, threesomes invovling conjoined twins, and all kinds of other mean nasty stuff. if you get bored take a tour.
thanks for the nipple check and hooker info.
Submitted by F.J.Bell (user info) at 2008-10-14 11:28:14 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I found the whole orgasm-at-knifepoint a bit unlikely, but enjoyed this nonetheless.
Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2008-10-14 11:26:43 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Oh no, I have no doubt there *are* good looking ones out there, you know, with the whole package.
I have seen them on the internet (I was looking for a female to have a threesome with me and the old man, someone not connected to either of us, you know how it goes..)
The best don't tend to street walk. The best tend to work for an escort agency or offer 'massage' in the home.
Usually junkies, old hags and scum street walk.
My knowledge of this subject is vast.
Also, I just checked, my nips (well, the arewhatever) don't stay perfectly round when taut and hard. My bad.
I am still shocked at you, I thought you were the Uber sweet guy! ;)
From mosiacs to prosititute slaying in one easy post!
Submitted by messmind (user info) at 2008-10-14 11:24:18 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Creepy, but a good read. Hidihi to o below.
Submitted by Brdn_Nkd (user info) at 2008-10-14 11:21:40 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
well i suppose most are round but some are not and areiolas (sp?) most certainly aren't always perfectly round. as for hookers, i've never experienced them though the ones i've seen in chicago were pretty foul looking. thanks for suspending your disbelief?
Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2008-10-14 11:11:42 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Barry! I am shocked! You sick twisted little puppy.
Two things, are most nips not round?
Also, why is it, in fiction, hookers are often 'beauties'?
In my experience, they are usually pig ugly with fit bodies or rather pretty with pudgy bodies.
good luck.
Submitted by Brdn_Nkd (user info) at 2008-10-14 10:44:16 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
oops my spererators didn't follow. sorry ya'll.